|Reviews for Kevin Barry|
| Un-Ended Tales Unravel 3/7/13 . chapter 1
I've never heard of Kevin Barry before, but it sounds like a very interesting story. To imagine this happened less then a hundred years ago.
Some of the rhyming is off if you were trying to make it all rhyme. It did flow very nicely though, right to the end. It is always interesting how in a poem someone can tell such a moving story in so few words. Well done.
| this wild abyss 6/8/12 . chapter 1
[From the Review Marathon, link in profile]
This was a very in your face type of poem, which, while not to my taste exactly, does have certain merits. I think it worked for you here and I liked it because it made your message stronger. I also liked the narrator's way of directly addressing the reader because it caught my attention and held it from start to finish.