A great introduction I love birds what a great story

Good luck. :) I really hope you do well.

1) your bio should be on your profile, not in your story

2) this site has the option to break your story up into chapters. That's not something to ignore!

3) you don't need a table of contents... there aren't pages on here!

I'd love to read this because your summary sounds extremely interesting, but I can't deal with a 53,000 word chapter... Sorry :(

not Ross