Hello from the Roadhouse!

This is the first time I've seen this type of writing style for a story, and I like it! Having a narrator makes it much more engaging and it definitely makes the information much easier to take in.

I like how you made Anthony the hero of the story then at the very beginning, you established that he died. Kind of reminds me of Shakespeare, who gives us the basic synopsis of all his plays right before they start. It's a pity that Anthony has to die, I might start liking him later on.

The Department of Compliance and the Department of Disorder reminds me all too much of 1984. Is that where you got the inspiration from? I just love dystopias.

Excellent work!