|Reviews for Until I was wanted|
| Un Lobo Solitario 6/23/12 . chapter 1
| this wild abyss 6/8/12 . chapter 1
[From the Review Marathon, link in profile]
I liked how your use of repetition in the first line of each stanza because it created an internal rhythm to the piece that drove me as a reader. There was a nice sense of continuity and flow while I read this that I liked, and I think the way your stanzas all started the same contributed to that aura. I also liked your use of enjambment because it broke up the text in a really cool and effective way that gave me as your reader a pause, which is awesome. Altogether, a really strong and lovely poem. Thanks for sharing it!