|Reviews for A million more suns|
| AnonymousLily 6/12/12 . chapter 1
Is there water in stars? I ask for the "it" which refers both to a star and water and light. If it hooks up to water and light, should it be a they?
The mask theme is lovely- how we hide our essence, which is light. I am in awe of this short piece.
| this wild abyss 6/8/12 . chapter 1
[From the Review Marathon, link in profile]
I really like the contemplative tone of this piece because it provokes thought and brings a certain atmosphere to the actual text that's really wonderful. I also like the author's use of "we" here, because it at once includes the reader and distances the narrator, which sounds weird and I'm not sure if it makes sense, but that's how I felt about your use of "we". Inclusive but exclusive. Which is pretty cool.