hey chyna can yo put more of my poetry on here please. i would be vwery thankful.

Man. Love the angst, the pain you feel is so vivid in this poem

Internal conflict, I think you expressed that really well

Powerful imagery.

It all flows very well if you ask me :) there is a smattering of some lovely adjectives and ponderings too. The poems aren't very long either (which is a good thing, don't worry :3)- I actually quite liked chapter 2's poem :D although, when I look at the sky, I always see stars and the occasional comet- because with my soul, I can't predict anything. In short-I just really liked the sky reference XD