Great story! I loved the movie and you did a great job basing your story off it!

Aww, I nearly started crying because it was so sad. Please update soon. I need to know what happens.

Hmm not bad not bad

Oops. Please ignore my last review(except for the part about it being good because it is.)

Good start but it is very similair to princess protection program only instead of the agent having a dsughter he has a son.

I loved this chapter! :D

AWWW! That was so cute and haha I guess Sandy's a good luck charm, huh?

I really like the outfit that was described earlier. Still, your writing is very choppy. It doesn't make sense how you say you're open to everything yet then you say don't say anything negative.

Okay, I get how PPP was your inspiration, but that starting introductory paragraph was exact lines from the movie, that's not right. Also, this wasn't very fluent.

This was so adorable and cute! :D

Great chappie! It was so sweet and cute! (-)

Lol I feel bad for the girl that plays Chelsea Brooks. (I call her Grace because is the place I've seen her the most in.) She's kind of really portrayed as a b*tch when in the show she's all sweet and nice. Anyhow, I like that you added a lot of original stuff to this chapter and I cannot wait for the rest :D.

Sheesh,Cam's rude.I like the story so far and i hope you update soon!

I would really like to see more original dialogue because it might be to early for me to judge, but so far, it's more or less the same. And I thought it was gonna be in Princess Sandy's POV because she's telling her baby girl. Well, update soon please :D

I like it please update soon