Superb. You captured so much and made this a brilliant piece! I loved the 'But as it is they are fragile, more human - Two people slipping through the pavement cracks.' Stanza, that was brilliant. :-D
The rhyming flowed perfectly and each line earned its place in this great piece!

This is spectacular for writing it at 1AM! I love the rhyme in this and it's a verry beautiful poem
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