|Reviews for Absence of Insanity|
| Reel Wander 8/28/12 . chapter 1
the world of fantasy, is as real to some as this world, but many are blind to it
| BookcraZzaY 7/10/12 . chapter 1
You use really big words that I haven't heard of before so I'm assuming you still believe in fairy tales at the end of this.
I didn't really understand some of the words but I have a small vocabulary so I had to look them up
| Mylilblackpen 6/17/12 . chapter 1
I can relate to this so much, but maybe that's because I like to dream. The imagery is fantastic! I really like this poem :D
| Utada Rumiko 6/9/12 . chapter 1
I enjoyed the poem as well, but I wish you stuck with the rhyming scheme you had going in the beginning. The 6th, 7th, and 8th lines kinda threw me off. Still, good job nonetheless.
| dragonflydreamer 6/9/12 . chapter 1
I love the last two lines of this. They have a feeling of wrapping up the piece nicely, almost in a lyrical way, and the image/emotion of it is great.
I feel like the flow was generally a little off, though. Each line is entirely self-contained with a pause at the end. This wouldn't always be a bad thing, but your images naturally flow together, so the linebreaks kind of interrupt that.
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