the world of fantasy, is as real to some as this world, but many are blind to it

nice poem

You use really big words that I haven't heard of before so I'm assuming you still believe in fairy tales at the end of this.
I didn't really understand some of the words but I have a small vocabulary so I had to look them up
Fantastic job!

I can relate to this so much, but maybe that's because I like to dream. The imagery is fantastic! I really like this poem :D

I enjoyed the poem as well, but I wish you stuck with the rhyming scheme you had going in the beginning. The 6th, 7th, and 8th lines kinda threw me off. Still, good job nonetheless.

I love the last two lines of this. They have a feeling of wrapping up the piece nicely, almost in a lyrical way, and the image/emotion of it is great.

I feel like the flow was generally a little off, though. Each line is entirely self-contained with a pause at the end. This wouldn't always be a bad thing, but your images naturally flow together, so the linebreaks kind of interrupt that.

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