Please! Continue this story if its the last thing I do. The first chapters interesting, and awesome, and you really caught my attention with it.

First person, third, second, who cares. Just write, don't stop at just a couple thousand words. You have a gem, here, I can feel it!

now i think this is going to be a great awesome story. well by the summary. however i'm a little afraid that this story will be a 1st person point of view which you're putting us the readers as "you" as in your actually talking to us. or something like that and or 2nd person point of view. which i really do hate, reading a 2nd person point view story. 1st person point of view is fine just don't make it like your actually talking to me/us the readers. now if you don't want to change the view point that's fine. i'll jut not be reading the story. this is my opinion, i don't know about anyone else. so yeah. if you want to massage me back just look for this same name. ti's my username here.

Oooh! Wow, this seems like its going to be waesome and excting :D