|Reviews for Trilingual|
| MagicWords 6/17/12 . chapter 1
I've never read anything like this, it was very good and interesting. Creative.
| lookingwest 6/9/12 . chapter 1
From the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
I liked this short piece because I thought it was really creative, I've never seen anything like this before and I think you might be on to something with the way you crafted it. I didn't like the last line though, because I thought it was a little bit of a deflating moment compared to some of the stronger bits of dialogue like the "We're speaking eyes", etc. It just wasn't as deep as I would've liked for an end-I wanted us to discover something a little less abrupt. But I don't think it ruins the piece or anything, I think overall it's really strong, and I liked the trilingual concept.