|Reviews for Something For the Pain|
| BookcraZzaY 7/16/12 . chapter 1
I love this!
It reminds me of an add I saw on tv the other day about how if we don't take care of the earth by 2050 everything will die on it
The falling part is scary it's like in Alice in wonderland when she seems to fall forever down the rabbit hole
;) ah-maze-ing XD
| Mylilblackpen 6/17/12 . chapter 1
Now this is spine-chilling spooky because you give a new perspective on something but you give it that spooky edge with the last line really hitting the gut hard. I really enjoyed it!
| AppleCrumble 6/12/12 . chapter 1
Good piece, liked it. It was a clear piece and had some really good ideas and was really effective great job! I loved the delayed rhyme! EPIC!
| Grimpeddler 6/11/12 . chapter 1
I like it. I love the delayed rhymes. You think it's free verse, and then-WHAMMO! Genius.
| Natari Mirumura 6/9/12 . chapter 1
Lovely poem. Keep it up :D