|Reviews for Heartbroken|
| CeCilia4ever 1/30/13 . chapter 1
Who did it Nat who !?... such an aamazing poem
| Ygg 1/12/13 . chapter 1
Very sad write, but you managed to express the emotional chaos of a broken heart quite well. Love the way you used rhyme. It really adds to the overall flow and tone of the poem. Well written!
| PureHeartsWait 11/19/12 . chapter 1
This is beautiful, and very sad but it's a great poem and I think it's what a lot of people go through.
| my.life.is.over 10/19/12 . chapter 1
| SkinnyLove203 7/31/12 . chapter 1
But don't be heartbroken. That dude was probably a prick anyway haha :) xx
| whoshallJudgeAngels 7/18/12 . chapter 1
*sniffs* That... was... beautiful. Very sensitive... you had me crying by the second stanza. :( :)
| Jupsi 7/16/12 . chapter 1
Such a strong poem... Urgh, it's bittersweet to be reading this with interest, knowing it's been hard on you XD
| Brokenm3 7/15/12 . chapter 1
I loved the sense behind this poem. I feel this way a lot.
| catching.my.breath 7/10/12 . chapter 1
Oh, my! This is byfar the most beautiful poem I've read in a long time-lovely to the nth degree! I love your style of wrting-very unique and creative
I hope to see more of your excellent writings in the near future! :) Keep up the good job, hun!
P.S. I want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my writings. I really love feedback. :)
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 1
Love it! The way it rhymes is lovely, and it so poignant.
| Kizoku Tsuyoi 7/8/12 . chapter 1
I like the feel the poem has: very emotional and true to life.
The first four lines...splendid.
I would prefer more imagery though.
Keep up the good work! :)
| Utada Rumiko 7/2/12 . chapter 1
A couple of spelling mistakes, but the heartbroken message you gave came out nicely done. Good job.
| Meadow Frost 6/24/12 . chapter 1
Very very good. The only heartbreak I've felt is from a book that nearly killed me. Not the same I can imagine.
I did notice one really small mistake but that's it.
| rust phoenix 6/19/12 . chapter 1
Aw, very sad piece. It's definitely relatable.
| LeoValdezgirl77 6/18/12 . chapter 1
Great work on this.
this is true to life.
nothing worse than having your heart broken