Who did it Nat who !?... such an aamazing poem

Very sad write, but you managed to express the emotional chaos of a broken heart quite well. Love the way you used rhyme. It really adds to the overall flow and tone of the poem. Well written!

This is beautiful, and very sad but it's a great poem and I think it's what a lot of people go through.

Good job..

Interesting :)
But don't be heartbroken. That dude was probably a prick anyway haha :) xx

*sniffs* That... was... beautiful. Very sensitive... you had me crying by the second stanza. :( :)

T_T
Such a strong poem... Urgh, it's bittersweet to be reading this with interest, knowing it's been hard on you XD

I loved the sense behind this poem. I feel this way a lot.

Oh, my! This is byfar the most beautiful poem I've read in a long time-lovely to the nth degree! I love your style of wrting-very unique and creative
I hope to see more of your excellent writings in the near future! :) Keep up the good job, hun!

P.S. I want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my writings. I really love feedback. :)

Love it! The way it rhymes is lovely, and it so poignant.

I like the feel the poem has: very emotional and true to life.
The first four lines...splendid.
I would prefer more imagery though.
Keep up the good work! :)

A couple of spelling mistakes, but the heartbroken message you gave came out nicely done. Good job.

Very very good. The only heartbreak I've felt is from a book that nearly killed me. Not the same I can imagine.

I did notice one really small mistake but that's it.

Loved it.

Aw, very sad piece. It's definitely relatable.

Great work on this.

this is true to life.

nothing worse than having your heart broken