|Reviews for Double Identity|
| Cesc 4/6/13 . chapter 20
Loved every chapter espacially the last one, sadly it had to end... Very nice story, i would totally buy it if it was a book. Write some more !
| twiheart1 1/7/13 . chapter 20
will you write a sequel? and btw, im Team Anthony! 3 3
| Justkeepswimmin 11/27/12 . chapter 20
Hey, long time, no see!
Great chapter, but I can't believe it's almost over!
Can't wait for the sequel (hint,hint)!
awesome possum. :D
| Clouded and Instincts 11/27/12 . chapter 20
| w3ardo 11/27/12 . chapter 20
you said this was going to be the last chapter then an epilogue? well this, as it is, doesn't seem finished at all. an epilogue is what's written after the whole thing is finished. I think it not appropriate to end it with her still questioning everything.
just my thought process...
| Bluesparks 11/27/12 . chapter 19
Oops, I meant hear and here... Sorry.
Also, I really don't want Franchesca and Anthony together, he seems really jealous and over protective. Buuut, Derek or Mark would be cute. I don't really think that Mark seems like such a jerk. Hey, if you were a guy, and your roommate slept with your girlfriend (not knowing that your roommate was actually a girl) you'd probably beat them up! Also, Derek seems pretty nice. Anthony... just meh...
Anywho, love it, keep writing! :)
| Bluesparks 11/27/12 . chapter 20
I've just started to read this, and it's really entertaining. It's funny how they're all children of famous people. You'd think it'd be chaotic. I like all of the characters, and it seems that since all the boys now know that she's a girl, and not a guy, they all are crushing on her. I believe that Anthony likes her, and doesn't like Mark, because he thinks that Mark will take Franchesca away from him.
On the first chapter, I was sort of iffy about reading on, because of the lack of detail, and it was a bit awkward. But, as I read on, it interested me. Also, I was wondering why Franchesca doesn't just ask her parents for a slip to not participate in sports, like one of the guys did. One more thing- Aren't Franchesca's parents supposed to be in Europe?
There are a few errors, like wear where, on one of these chapters. Other than that, I enjoyed reading this.
| Charles O'Carry 11/5/12 . chapter 19
Yeah great update, but why can't Chesca be with Anthony or Derek? The two nicest, hottest guys ever? Not Mark! I just, I still don't really trust him or care for him anymore after the whole, "girl-bashing incident". I know that he didn't know it was Chesca but I just don't find it that realistic how Chesca just forgave him after he took a swing at her. Because if I were Chesca, I would tell him to go to hell! I know everyone deserves a second chance, but imagine that they go out and live happily ever after, and then looking back at that whole incident, how can she just see past this? You can't just erase or rewrite history or erase your own memory.
| Clouded and Instincts 11/4/12 . chapter 19
| Love n' Vain 11/3/12 . chapter 19
But-but-but... You cant just get me all happy that Chesca and Derek may get together and then have Mark fall in love with her! I want Chesca and Derek together3 he's so quiet and nice and Mark is Mark...
| Kate Prior 11/3/12 . chapter 19
Awww! Love it! Update soon! :)
| Justkeepswimmin 11/2/12 . chapter 19
Awesome! I hope she gets tog with Anthony! They're just meant to be!
| The Dancing Ginger 711 9/22/12 . chapter 18
loved it! hope you update really soon :)
| Clouded and Instincts 9/19/12 . chapter 18
love the new update!
| Love n' Vain 9/19/12 . chapter 18
Awhhh:) Derek! Yay finally more Derek! Makes me super duper happy!