Petrov is awesome.

nice

Nice. Post again soon

continue duh.

I do not think there is really much to review in this chapter. It is not outstanding or terrible, but I felt like I had to say something.
-Alex

Did you really have to have the whole list of where everybody was because it is not like anyone is going to remember it word for word, and if this is only a teen rating, then why is there so much sex?
-Alex

Sure, I will continue reading. This is interesting.
-Alex

Here is an answer to your note. I thought that it was interesting, but I am afraid that it is going to get gory in the near future.
-Alex

BLOCK PARAGRAPH! Kill it dead!

Nobody's gonna read that either. Too big.

I like this! Keep it up!

Nobody's gonna read that roster. I'd give it in narrative summary, if there's anything super important about it. Better yet, in internal monologue.

YAY SEXYTIMES.

I hope you continue because this is one awesome story. I hope you get it published.

It seems good so far, keep it up.

I definitely like this. The tone seems more relaxed than your other stories, and the barcodes are interesting. Update soon!

-REB

I LIKE IT UPDATE SOON.

*goes to pee*

First review! I win! Muahahaha... I have no life. Love your profile pic, by the way.

"Most of us already knew ten ways that a person could be killed, although I will admit, they were noisy and very messy." Somebody lock me in a hospital, I laughed at that line. It is a little awkward, though - maybe change 'that a person could be killed' to 'to kill a person'?

Strawberry moonshine. LOL. There's something about this chapter that's so weidly hilarious. Nice start, I'm loving it. :)

Update soon! -TK