|Reviews for Ritual Girl|
| Brittany 6/4/13 . chapter 40
| Brittany 5/26/13 . chapter 40
I need more! What happens? Write more!
| MysticNight 5/15/13 . chapter 39
Wow amazing two chapters things are really starting to kick off I sense can't wait for the next one please don't make me wait too long :) Great as ever take care MN
| SparrowLilies 5/14/13 . chapter 2
| FayeColwen 5/14/13 . chapter 39
MORE. NOW. No, I'm kidding. Take your time. I'm just gonna go do what I always do after reading a chapter... lay down on my bed and cry until a new chapter comes out.
| Curlysquirt95 5/14/13 . chapter 39
I know you wanted to end with a cliffhanger, but can you please make your chapters longer? It takes away the flow of the story and I sometimes have a hard time remembering what's happening. The story is great so far, as always.
| FayeColwen 5/5/13 . chapter 37
I NEED an update. Now. Or I'll die a painful death. So there.
| Mystic Night 5/3/13 . chapter 36
Please can it be a longer chapter next time :) its getting really good and the wait is almost painful. Great chapter as always take care MN
| myheart4you 5/1/13 . chapter 23
IM SO CONFUSED. I feel like these last two chapters have been important, but I have NO idea what's going on. You're still an excellent writer, I'm just stupid.
| myheart4you 5/1/13 . chapter 22
Okay... So... What side is the Queen on?
| myheart4you 5/1/13 . chapter 21
I'm slightly confused... What's going to happen instead of her dying?
It'll prolly be explained later.
This is SUCH a captivating story.
| myheart4you 5/1/13 . chapter 19
THE PILLS MAKE THEM SEE STUFF WHAT IS THIS
How the f*ck do you come up with this crap? Crap being totally good, trust me.
Soo. People aren't perfect? I was wondering about that, how they made the skin perfect.
| myheart4you 5/1/13 . chapter 18
So, I love the way you write. It's really great.
This chapter made me want to go off about politics but I don't want to talk about it because those types of debates last forever. And don't get me started on religion...
Anyway; I just realized that they seriously control hormones? Dumb. Would ruin a first kiss for sure.
PAIGE listen to Mott. You don't have to die.
| myheart4you 5/1/13 . chapter 17
Awesomeness. Seriously, that was the least cliche description of a kiss that I've read, which is amazing. Seriously, all kissing scenes in books are the same.
PAIGE YOU ARE not GOING TO BE BURNED AT THE STAKE.
Yeah, I get that the book has other elements, but that in particular bothers me.
| myheart4you 5/1/13 . chapter 14
I would not be able to enjoy my free time if I were to burn at the stake. Seriously, my worst possible deaths would be either that or drowning. I don't know how Paige does it, except that perhaps she's used to seeing it happen and she's in denial.
That exam/procedure sounds uncomfortable. Seriously, I hate going to the doctors as well, and then... Just... Ugh. I still don't get why there has to be a girl burning at the stake in the first place.