Write more!

I need more! What happens? Write more!

Wow amazing two chapters things are really starting to kick off I sense can't wait for the next one please don't make me wait too long :) Great as ever take care MN

Oh my...

MORE. NOW. No, I'm kidding. Take your time. I'm just gonna go do what I always do after reading a chapter... lay down on my bed and cry until a new chapter comes out.

I know you wanted to end with a cliffhanger, but can you please make your chapters longer? It takes away the flow of the story and I sometimes have a hard time remembering what's happening. The story is great so far, as always.

I NEED an update. Now. Or I'll die a painful death. So there.

Please can it be a longer chapter next time :) its getting really good and the wait is almost painful. Great chapter as always take care MN

IM SO CONFUSED. I feel like these last two chapters have been important, but I have NO idea what's going on. You're still an excellent writer, I'm just stupid.

Okay... So... What side is the Queen on?

I'm slightly confused... What's going to happen instead of her dying?

It'll prolly be explained later.

This is SUCH a captivating story.

THE PILLS MAKE THEM SEE STUFF WHAT IS THIS

How the f*ck do you come up with this crap? Crap being totally good, trust me.

Soo. People aren't perfect? I was wondering about that, how they made the skin perfect.

So, I love the way you write. It's really great.
This chapter made me want to go off about politics but I don't want to talk about it because those types of debates last forever. And don't get me started on religion...

Anyway; I just realized that they seriously control hormones? Dumb. Would ruin a first kiss for sure.

PAIGE listen to Mott. You don't have to die.

Awesomeness. Seriously, that was the least cliche description of a kiss that I've read, which is amazing. Seriously, all kissing scenes in books are the same.

PAIGE YOU ARE not GOING TO BE BURNED AT THE STAKE.

Yeah, I get that the book has other elements, but that in particular bothers me.

I would not be able to enjoy my free time if I were to burn at the stake. Seriously, my worst possible deaths would be either that or drowning. I don't know how Paige does it, except that perhaps she's used to seeing it happen and she's in denial.

That exam/procedure sounds uncomfortable. Seriously, I hate going to the doctors as well, and then... Just... Ugh. I still don't get why there has to be a girl burning at the stake in the first place.