|Reviews for Slocomb's Pond|
| Blood and Butterflies 6/26/12 . chapter 2
Peer pressure strikes again. Very suspenseful! Can't wait to read more.
| Blood and Butterflies 6/26/12 . chapter 1
Wow! Very exciting. I wonder what the narrator had to do to be part of the group? Onto the next chapter!
| 11's-SevenofHearts 6/25/12 . chapter 4
Nice update. One thing confused me, though. The boys said that four people went missing near the pond, and then you mentioned five: Percival Slocomb, Otis Smith, Bert Hinson, Grayson Jones, and Jocelyn Meriwether. Besides that, though, this was a good chapter.
| 11's-SevenofHearts 6/18/12 . chapter 3
I like your attention to detail. Nice characterization, too. I'm excited to see where you go with this. :)