I absolutely adored everything in your story. The characters, the twists, the emotion under each situation. You are a very good writter, and I like all of your descriptions, either being the one of a character, circumstance, or setting as they are very detailled. However, when I read this was goig to be the last chapter, I thought it was too soon for it to so suddenly end. But after reading the last chapter, I think it was great the way you ended it! Awesome story, how did you come up with it I don't know; every character's background is very original. Overall, I loved it! Write something else soon! :)

I like this chapter and Karen's attitude towards Melissa (probably because I love To Kill A Mockingbird). I like how you portray Melissa's ignorance; she's a very realistic character.

The previous chapter was really depressing but this chapter I almost thought matt was going to be killed by him. Then there would really be no reason to read this story anymore. Curtis can talk?!

you asked for us to review. I think I've
reviewed before...I'm not sure. The thing is I really love your story, I particularily like the detail in which you describe each character and his/her feelings. I've been trying to write mu stories in third person, but I fail miserably I can only try and write in first person. This is why I find yours and many other authors' writing amazing! I like how yo connect every characyer woth the other thrpugh the smallest of things! Please never atop writing. :)

I hope things take a turn for the better for Matt. I liked what you did with Jackie in this and the previous chapter. Your characters are believable and I hope things get better for them. Your story is quite good. You should really continue this story. I like your story.

Matt.. TAT
I wonder when his life gonna be brighter,,,
I'm also curious about all of them, haha.
Especially, curtis ;)
Keep up the good work author-san!

I absolutely love the story. I love how you describe each character's background in such detail and how they all conect when being so different. Please update soon! :)

Jackie's need for attention was predictable. Dan is a horrible person. Let's see what else happens.

Quite an interesting set of characters you've got there, I'll be waiting to see how you develop them some more!

Please continue this. This story is sad but great in a way.

Very sad and very touching. I hope everything works out for Matt. He seems so strong, but even the strongest of us have a breaking point. Please don't stop writing.

Tear jerker. I love the way you write your story. It's very heart wrenching. I love it.

This is very well written! I would only suggest double spacing your document to make reading easier on the eyes. But the story, on the whole, is good so far.

Now i want to read even more after this.

I liked this chapter it can lead to so much more further on. Its really easy to imagine someone like Melissa. It's clear that you've read mockingbird.