|Reviews for Shattered Existence|
| zaria d. idonia 8/12/12 . chapter 14
I absolutely adored everything in your story. The characters, the twists, the emotion under each situation. You are a very good writter, and I like all of your descriptions, either being the one of a character, circumstance, or setting as they are very detailled. However, when I read this was goig to be the last chapter, I thought it was too soon for it to so suddenly end. But after reading the last chapter, I think it was great the way you ended it! Awesome story, how did you come up with it I don't know; every character's background is very original. Overall, I loved it! Write something else soon! :)
| Abbytjie 8/11/12 . chapter 2
I like this chapter and Karen's attitude towards Melissa (probably because I love To Kill A Mockingbird). I like how you portray Melissa's ignorance; she's a very realistic character.
| ScrapsOfLove 8/5/12 . chapter 12
The previous chapter was really depressing but this chapter I almost thought matt was going to be killed by him. Then there would really be no reason to read this story anymore. Curtis can talk?!
| zaria d. idonia 7/13/12 . chapter 10
you asked for us to review. I think I've
reviewed before...I'm not sure. The thing is I really love your story, I particularily like the detail in which you describe each character and his/her feelings. I've been trying to write mu stories in third person, but I fail miserably I can only try and write in first person. This is why I find yours and many other authors' writing amazing! I like how yo connect every characyer woth the other thrpugh the smallest of things! Please never atop writing. :)
| ScrapsOfLove 7/12/12 . chapter 10
I hope things take a turn for the better for Matt. I liked what you did with Jackie in this and the previous chapter. Your characters are believable and I hope things get better for them. Your story is quite good. You should really continue this story. I like your story.
| Amusuk 6/29/12 . chapter 8
I wonder when his life gonna be brighter,,,
I'm also curious about all of them, haha.
Especially, curtis ;)
Keep up the good work author-san!
| zaria d. idonia 6/23/12 . chapter 8
I absolutely love the story. I love how you describe each character's background in such detail and how they all conect when being so different. Please update soon! :)
| Hoshi-M 6/20/12 . chapter 8
Jackie's need for attention was predictable. Dan is a horrible person. Let's see what else happens.
| Hoshi-M 6/17/12 . chapter 7
Quite an interesting set of characters you've got there, I'll be waiting to see how you develop them some more!
| ScrapsOfLove 6/17/12 . chapter 7
Please continue this. This story is sad but great in a way.
| MagicWords 6/15/12 . chapter 4
Very sad and very touching. I hope everything works out for Matt. He seems so strong, but even the strongest of us have a breaking point. Please don't stop writing.
| MagicWords 6/15/12 . chapter 3
Tear jerker. I love the way you write your story. It's very heart wrenching. I love it.
| MagicWords 6/15/12 . chapter 1
This is very well written! I would only suggest double spacing your document to make reading easier on the eyes. But the story, on the whole, is good so far.
| ScrapsOfLove 6/14/12 . chapter 3
Now i want to read even more after this.
| ScrapsOfLove 6/14/12 . chapter 2
I liked this chapter it can lead to so much more further on. Its really easy to imagine someone like Melissa. It's clear that you've read mockingbird.