Tough, powerful and interestingly enough plain. Callisto is a one of a kind character, especially in this day and age. I love, LOVE this originality that you have. It's very refreshing, especially after the countless Twilight and Huger Games remakes out there. For once, the heroine... is just that a female hero, quite capable of taking care of herself and doesn't have to rely on her beauty to get her through the trouble. Your story seems very plot driven, which I'm not saying is a bad thing. Many a story is plot driven. I like the action, and you don't have an aversion to having your females fighting either. You're very talented. Brilliant start, please continue writing you never know where this story might lead you.

LadyKnight. (: