Awesome story! Can't wait to see what comes next!

This is something that could actually belong in a book. The interactions between the characters make them think. Scarlet is a girl who tries to consider her opinions-is the merchant wealthy or bogus? It makes you wonder what is bogus and what is real.

I really enjoyed this so far and I haven't read anything on penal colonies before so it should be interesting. However you shouldn't really use caps lock on sentences. It makes it seem... Less good I suppose.