|Reviews for Forever|
| Small Wings Flying 7/16/12 . chapter 1
I like the softness of this tone because it really does give the impression of being in a dream, all wispy and gentle to the eyes and ears, talking about hard-core philosophy questions but just drifting along in a sense. Normally it doesn't work, but this is one of those rare cases when it does if you can pull it off, and you have.
I don't like the harder sounds like "-ct-" showing up. They rarely do, but they really break the softer rhythm you had going.
| blackabyss1 6/14/12 . chapter 1
This definately made me think. A poem full of questions, this is something new. Nice work.