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   rust phoenix 12/13/12 . chapter 1i love your descriptions in this poem, especially in the fourth stanza. your metaphors are lovely, and my favourite part is "i is / tiny / like / a / lie / that / spun / out / of / control.". |
| D. Cowman 8/14/12 . chapter 1 Painful idealism makes good art. I like the bit about the impossible eye (i?) color. |
| a theoretic revolution 6/19/12 . chapter 1 i like this. great job |
| ebbs 6/18/12 . chapter 1 didn't log on. ahh. this is so pERF. LOVE the concept. you hoar. you cannot possibly be this great. i approves. |
| madame matryoshka 6/15/12 . chapter 1 this is just... wow. i can't. "i is tiny like a lie that spun out of control." fabulous. |
| empty seas 6/14/12 . chapter 1 this was such an intriguing piece. beautiful use of language, and you have a very distinctive style. this was a really, really captivating poem, great work! |
| becquerel 6/14/12 . chapter 1 you are so great so talented i can't even this is so good how are you so talent im cry a ok |
