|Reviews for The Red Girl|
| Brimo94 3/2/13 . chapter 11
hahahahahahah awesome! :D :) yayy she finally knows! :))) I know that she isn't going to accept the idea of being his mate at first, but I really do hope that towards the end she realizes how true it is and how much they really care about each other ( unlike in the first version , where it was more like "ugh okay i'll give you a chance" sort of thing )
Yay! I'm so excited! :))))
| Brimo94 2/24/13 . chapter 10
This is a very well-written chapter. It shows that you took your time on it. No typos and good structure... i like how this turned out.. and the story is finally getting to the answers. I personally can't wait to get some answers! :) Yay! Waiting for the next chapter! Thanks for sharing! I love it...
| Brimo94 2/18/13 . chapter 9
Woop woop, we're progressing :) Nice work. Looking forward to more! :D
| Brimo94 2/9/13 . chapter 8
I really like this chapter... for some reason it really filled me up.. very satisfying! Thanks for sharing. You're really doing a great job with this rewrite... i get the feeling that something's up with Jack... like either he worked with her dad and is keeping an eye on her OR he's covering himself up as a nice guy but is actually one of the guys that wants to get her. Anyway, again... great job! :))
| Brimo94 1/28/13 . chapter 7
Nice! Some action ! Again, the length is great! Thanks again for that modification! :D :) I liked this chapter even more than the previous... I wonder how those assholes are going to try to her now... hopefully, Kayne will be around to save her next time, too! :)) Yay! Loving this... and waiting for more. Thanks for sharing!
| Brimo94 1/28/13 . chapter 6
Hell yes! This is considerably longer! Thanks for doing that :) It also really improved the writing and the style. Now the story is going more smoothly because the chapter's length is considerable. It also helps fill in more of the bridge moments. I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope that the next ones are also around this length... a little less is okay if this length doesn't work out too well. Thanks for sharing! And I'm really looking forward to more! It's nice that you're introducing the father issue and mystery behind it a bit earlier on, and involving Emma in uncovering the secrets will make her conflict more central and, consequently, from what i know from the first story, the three brothers as well.. It's progressing nicely! Thanks ! :D
| LovesSharpEdge 1/25/13 . chapter 6
good chapter i want to know who the guy on the phone was update soon
| Brimo94 1/15/13 . chapter 5
It's good so far :) but would it be too much to ask to make the chapters a weee bit longer? :(
The chapters are quite short and not much story gets down this way... maybe if you lengthened them a bit, it would be better.
Anyways, thanks for sharing! :)) :D
| Brimo94 1/15/13 . chapter 4
It is a filler, but it wasn't really boring... i always thought that fillers are important, anyway. :D :) Thanks for sharing!
| Brimo94 12/25/12 . chapter 3
Ahh even better than before :) Thanks for sharing! Looking forward to the next chapter! and it's good to have you and your story back!
| Brimo94 12/5/12 . chapter 2
I'm liking the rewrite more than the original :) Thanks for sharing! Waiting for the next chapter... and, by the way, if you don't mind me asking: is there a specific schedule you go by for updating? As in a specific day each week that you update or is it monthly orrr what? I just want to know what to expect, because, even though i already read the first version, I'm still really excited to continue this one as soon as possible :) Very nice work!
| Sweatered5Hatchets 7/4/12 . chapter 2
love it! please update soon!