I love this chapter! It was so descriptive, I felt as if I was among the corn stalks! I am so happy, I have never gotten a shout out in a book before, yayyyy! :)))

This was my favorite chapter! It was so different from the rest of the story. :)

An interesting plot, but it has many errors in it, it be grammatical or spelling.

-Hermie

I love it! Its very descriptive and exciting. Keep on writing!

!YOLO!