|Reviews for In Her Arms|
| Aerith Rei 6/19/12 . chapter 1
Thank you for the review! This was a very sad story. I could definitely see that the mother was in pain. That was described very well. I do wish though that there was more imagery. More nitty gritty of the emotions. But very good story.
| XiaanRei 6/16/12 . chapter 1
Wow. This is so emotional and powerful, it almost makes you want to cry whilst reading it; you definitely know how to provoke a strong reaction.
I also love the line "He was gone too soon.", I think it really adds to the mood, but also highlights the heartbreak the mother must have been feeling.
And, the reactions of the mother, father and doctor are realistic, which is something a lot of stories aren't.
I feel really stupid being picky, but you missed a speech mark in here: '"My child. My only child. Silent tears'. That doesn't really matter at all though, beautiful story; thanks for sharing.