I liked that last line "shit would hit the fan". I'm laughing out loud right now(:

Filler-ish? I see you seem to be taking my advice to heart, which is pretty awesome. I am really suspicious right now and I am so hoping Aiden has been doing what I think he's doing! (Or should I say WHO I think he's doing?) Ugh. The hopeful side of me wants to believe he's keeping something, but it's not what we all think it is. That hopeful side thinks you're an awesome writer and will suddenly put a twist in it... ;)

Aiden what are you doing ? Stop doing everything and focus on Ali! XD update soon!

Nice reaction to their mom! She was obviously a fake, superficial woman. But Ali and Aiden are making progress! Update soon!

Oh my god! I just started reading this story and I have to say, it is literally onenof the best stories I have ever read! Please please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted :)

This is interesting, and a lot happened in one chapter. It's very good, I like it a lot :) Chad seems like a very sweet guy, and I hope she sees more of him

HOLY CRAP. Bigger bitch than I thought! Like geez, what a freakin' heartless ice queen! I just can't believe it's only chapter 12. I really want to see Ali and Aiden work out, but with the way it looks right now I feel like it'd be better and more realistic if they settled everything, but Ali still left for college... I know, everyone would kill me for saying that.

I'm crazy interested in where this is going and I'm just waiting for what will happen in New York. ;) I love this storyline, it's just that I don't think there's enough feeling and emotion in it (that is, if you actually WANT my opinion).

SPEEDY UPDATE BY THE WAY! I wish you could always be like this! ;P

Hmmm...I think Aiden's really serious about Ali now so he shouldn't go and see Sloane right? Hopefully her mom won't be too bad. Keep up the good work and update soon!

I loved seeing her dad! Not very eventful, but I can't wait until Thanksgiving dinner. ;) I'm still really wondering what's going on with Aiden. As far as I know there's no reason he wouldn't be sincere about being faithful... But with Ali's doubts, I'm not sure if I should be suspicious...

Update soon! I really liked this chapter!

Just wanted ti say that you are an excellent writer, and I like this story! Keep up the good work!

I think I already read this...have you posted this one before? or did you post the wrong one? :(

This is such a great story! It looks like Aiden has changed, but what if he sneaks out and then comes back? He better not hurt Ali again! I'll kill him if he does! Update soon!

Yay! I'm so glad you updated! I wouldn't believe those rumors about Sloane for a minute, but Aiden obviously needs to redeem himself. ;) I didn't know it was only November... Poor Ali. I bet Aiden's going to get sick now!

Awww! So cute!