|Reviews for Flowers|
| AnonymousLily 6/16/12 . chapter 1
Gah, I think I dated this guy! I like the enjambment and lack of punctuation- works well. If you read it straight through, it sounds simple, but the line breaks reflect the narrator's point of view- dualing between should and don't want to. The "nothing else feels this way" leaves it open ended- leaving it up to the reader.