I'm too stupid to talk about all the metaphorical meanings I see, but I happen to love this one. In fact, I quite like your style.

...interesting

the title fits perfect... I like the style... the way you used short lines then placed a long line at the end of each phrase... it was a great piece...

weeeeee nice, it almost feels like i can really hear what a dragon is thinking (dragons are cool) almost.

JA~

'the sun is darker than the shadow of his wings'
Gah! I love it. That has to be the best ending line to a poem I've ever read. I love the messages written between the lines as well. Beautifully done.
- Jo

Awsome poem! I love dragons!

i can see why this would be published, the details are entrancing and attractive (in my opinion)

the syllable's rythm lures the reader on, a special style you have, haven't seen it in others at all, that i must admit ^_^

luv~~*
Cin

i love dragons and this poem was quite interesting. very pleasant!

cool i like fantasy stuff

it's great. i like the line 'his breath is music' best. great work

pretty weal an eagel was my old mascot was and i laughted at the painting on the front off the school. you know what they killed an eagel a long time ago just to put it in our trophy chase i don't go ther any more i go to a chater seee ya kari

You have a very beautiful style. I feel honored that you would even like some of my older poetry. *grins*

You have a wonderful way with words Ellerfru

it's lovely. it's wooooonderful! all my reviews are starting to sound the same, but that's all i have to say.

Cool. I like dragons. Aren't they fire creatures? You don't seem to mind. But then, dragons are wonderful creatures...

Nice imagery. It's how I imagine dragons to be like. Are the last lines supposed to be so long?