|Reviews for Laughing at the Eagle|
| a silenced revolution 3/18/07 . chapter 1
I'm too stupid to talk about all the metaphorical meanings I see, but I happen to love this one. In fact, I quite like your style.
| Morwain 5/3/06 . chapter 1
| Snowy Moon 4/29/06 . chapter 1
the title fits perfect... I like the style... the way you used short lines then placed a long line at the end of each phrase... it was a great piece...
| Loup17 4/11/05 . chapter 1
weeeeee nice, it almost feels like i can really hear what a dragon is thinking (dragons are cool) almost.
| Jo The Pirate 10/20/04 . chapter 1
'the sun is darker than the shadow of his wings'
Gah! I love it. That has to be the best ending line to a poem I've ever read. I love the messages written between the lines as well. Beautifully done.
| just like me 5/13/03 . chapter 1
Awsome poem! I love dragons!
| shredmyties 12/4/02 . chapter 1
i can see why this would be published, the details are entrancing and attractive (in my opinion)
the syllable's rythm lures the reader on, a special style you have, haven't seen it in others at all, that i must admit _
| Kuroi Yosei 8/15/02 . chapter 1
i love dragons and this poem was quite interesting. very pleasant!
| wqwq 8/12/02 . chapter 1
cool i like fantasy stuff
| hoellenwauwau 8/11/02 . chapter 1
it's great. i like the line 'his breath is music' best. great work
| Hikarineko Skadi 8/9/02 . chapter 1
pretty weal an eagel was my old mascot was and i laughted at the painting on the front off the school. you know what they killed an eagel a long time ago just to put it in our trophy chase i don't go ther any more i go to a chater seee ya kari
| Jateshi 5/29/02 . chapter 1
You have a very beautiful style. I feel honored that you would even like some of my older poetry. *grins*
You have a wonderful way with words Ellerfru
| moonbunny38 5/27/02 . chapter 1
it's lovely. it's wooooonderful! all my reviews are starting to sound the same, but that's all i have to say.
| lady alpha 5/20/02 . chapter 1
Cool. I like dragons. Aren't they fire creatures? You don't seem to mind. But then, dragons are wonderful creatures...
| playergurl 5/19/02 . chapter 1
Nice imagery. It's how I imagine dragons to be like. Are the last lines supposed to be so long?