The story is very exciting. Especially if you are a homo, but thats not the point.

I havent read all the chapters but i could see where the story is going. The opening was action packed, mind blowing and set me right in.

Alot of characters was introduced, causing a bit of madness and confusion. Overall a very strong and very interesting opening. I love it darling!

"CIA operatives, KGB spies, Taliban soldiers, Mafia, Yakuza and SAS troops blocked his every escape route." quoted from the second sentence. How could the CIA, KGB, Taliban, Mafia, Yakuza and SAS come together and waste their money just on capturing one guy? The introduction doesn't really make sense. Other than that, the story is polished and well written. Enjoyed reading it.

Nice story it almost felt real.