It's such a sound and powerful poem, I almost felt like I was drowning in her sorrow. I loved the imagery and you had me hanging there till the very last word. I loved it :)

This poem means a lot to me. The girl that was pushed to the edge was depressed and brought down because people told her she wasn't beautiful. It's just sad she had to keep thinking that.. I like that this shows what happens to people who try to make themselves beautiful;they fall through the cracks.

Very nice and deep. Keep it up :D