Other then the occasional typos, this is very well written! Excited to read more, keep up the good work!

This is a pretty good story. I like the plot and all your characters are portrayed in a very distinctive manner. The culture of the K'nairi is interesting and you have managed to put in conflicting opinions on matters, which always makes stories more juicy and believable. I'm very much on Ryraso's side in this argument, though, and hope that Tai-ray will see what he means at some point. The only fault I could find is your language. Many of your sentence's stuctures don't flow well and sometimes even your meaning is unclear because of this. It's also very tiring to read unclear writing, when half the time I have to guess at what you mean. I would suggest that you'd try to find a beta with a good hold on the english language. ...I actually might be interested in betaing this story for you at a later date, since I like it. Right now university is being a pain in the ass, but you could contact me if you wish, and we'll see if I have the time. Anyways, good writing, hope you'll update soon. :)

The dynamics of a polygamous relationship is really interesting. You just manage to make it so...equal in power to all participants, should I say? I don't know if that was the right phrase.

I think Eyeri's fate so far is the most mysterious one to me.

This is an awesome story! I love it!

This is really good. I simply love the plot. Cant wait for the next chapter :3

Yay! Finally some interaction between Tai-ray and Ryraso! Hope to see more Ryraso. His story is definitely my favourite.

This is an amazing story! I found it randomly and simply fell in love from the beginning it was interesting. Hope you update soon. Love it :3

... Probably not the best thing you could have said just then, Ryraso ... I hope that doesn't send the kid back into a panic. Cause it could, it very easily could.

Excellently done and as always, I look forward to more.

good chapter ,, ok i know i am not a good reviewer

I'm really starting to get more and more interested in Herymi and his partners. I can't wait for Herymi to have a proper reunion at the nest.

I do hope that it will never get down to it that Tai-ray has to have sex with Eyeri, because they have the potential on being purely a sweet father-son relationship.

Chapter 21 is not showing up! (

Such a quick update! I absolutely adore this story and am glad that you're updating again! :) Poor Herymi. I wonder what's going to happen with him. There seems to be a lot of human K'nairi confusion about this whole claim thing. Hopefully it works out the best for everyone. great job and hope you update soon! :D

And the plot thickens, it's going to be interesting to see how Tai-ray and Ryraso clash over this

I haven't seen a update in a while, glad to have one again!

I hadn't realized it had been so long since I'd read this thing. There were a lot more updates than I'd been expecting lol. Love the story. You know, my mind kept trying to tell me that there was gonna be a relationship with Tai-ray, but since I'd heard he was already mated I kept telling myself 'nope, that's not what it is'. And then what happens? what I'd originally thought lol.

So, good job with that. Also, there are several spelling/wording errors I've noticed on a second read through (couldn't remember where I'd left off). Nothing too major. It's fairly obvious what you meant to do, but it's something to look for.

Love the story so far, and you're doing an excellent job.

Allanasha Ke Kiri