I like it. Reeeeeally like it. But watevr hapend to th nxt chapter. And sumthng i noticed abt u, all ur lead females hav fast metabolism nd are food crazy. Lol. Yea i went thru a couple of ur othr stuf. U SERIOUSLY NEED TO FINISH THE ONE WITH THE GUYS ND DAT GRL WID THE WEIRD NAME, Something harley heller. gunner , ryker , raiden or sumthng lyk your writing. Not a member of fiction press yet since i do this from my phone and its crack. Will follow you as room as my lap gets fixed . :)

loved it! specially the last part. slo mo and all bro. but the POV change kinda caught me off guard

Has it been five minutes yet? love this love this love this! love her character too please update soon x

Like it so far! Cant wait for more!

Like it so far! Cant wait for more!