Good chapter. I see that you used my suggestion to have
Kevin re-visit the pet store. I wonder what adventures
Duke will have next.

This is a good chapter. I can't think of any
suggestions for Duke's adventures. But you might write something about the little boy who wanted him, how he
goes back to the pet store and feels disappointed when
he learns that Duke has been sold.

This is very nice and makes the reader wonder if Duke's
adventures will eventually take him to the litle boy
who wants him so much.

This is a nice start of a good story to read to small children. I'm sure they will fall in love with the puppies.

Aw. Cuuuuuute! :)