OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOVE THIS. THIS IS TWISTED, EVIL AND ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. you are a wonderful author. everything about this is perfect. the charaters are all well formed and stilll at the same time mysterious. the setting is well described. the summary is perfect. you give your reader just enough information, not to much, not too little. all in all, it is supurb! keep going

Am in love with please finish it