|Reviews for School Wars|
| Roflmao101 7/15/12 . chapter 1
Really interesting. In the begining you wrote "I and my squad" it should be "My squad and I", remember others before yourself. Other than that, the story is quite flawless. Though, there is a slight confusion on the school because it doesn't seem like a school but for me the thing that reminder that they were children were the spit balls, paint gun and the freeze balloons (which is quite funny). Loving where this goes and I can't wait for more. You say in the sixth chapter (Battle seven) that you're going to transfer this to the sister site. Let us know the name of the story! Really want to see where this goes!
| Miki-blue 7/12/12 . chapter 1
This is a great story, I'm looking forward for new chapter. But can you tell us more about the characters.
| Jay Dearest 7/10/12 . chapter 3
Lol I love this story.
| Roses are redx 7/9/12 . chapter 1
This is very well written and an interesting idea (I mean that in a good way!) but it doesn't really seem like a school. That's probably the idea but I'm a little bit confused about how this is happening in a school. Also, how would kids have a gas thing that could freeze you? I liked the idea of paint ball and stuff because that was very believable and funny!
Anyway, very good, no punctuation or spelling errors or anything boring like that, and you should definately have more reviews, as it is very good! I think I said that already... oh well, loved it!