That was REALLY good - is it just gonna be a one-shot? I hope you continue! You're an amazing writer x

Rae's definitely an interesting character. The only problem I have is the telling (vs showing and all that happy crappy), but I guess you hafta get the backstory/worldbuilding through someway, and honestly I'd prefer this way to some blantantly infodumpy conversation.

Good job. Waiting for more.

-REB