Wow, Jimmy really captures the traits of a serial killer that is CLEARLY off his rocker... And also scares me that this is a LOOK into your own mind... I like how he suddenly snaps into sanity after the doctor stops him. He's not of Bipolar personality syndrome right?

Well written and short enough to point out a part of his probably really complex mind. Or he just simply be insane. I'd like to see it in your later chapters!