|Reviews for turnover|
| Sayure 12/13/12 . chapter 2
This chapter is better.
| Sayure 12/13/12 . chapter 1
The problem in your style of writings is that you don't use paragraphs. You need paragraphs and space between them otherwise it hurt on the eye and it's not welcoming to read.
| Nevermore23 11/21/12 . chapter 5
Is he dead!?
Please update soon!
| Nevermore23 11/5/12 . chapter 2
Its good so far
I can't wait to read more, please update soon