Alright, this is quite an interesting story, where the readers are not only looking through Rosau's eyes, but also experiencing what she's going through. But maybe you need to fix on the layout on your writing, because it's so distracting and the pacing is... well, maybe you can try to slow it down for a bit? But other than that, you're doing alright. I won't be commenting about your grammar because I suck at it anyways. So, please keep up the good work.

Louis-sama (2012)

Alright, this is interesting. Please keep up the good work.

Louis-sama (2012)

I like this. :Π

This is a great story. Its making me want more. Please keep writing

This is an interesting story so far.

I am eager to see what will happen to Rosau.