Thank you for this chapter! I am thoroughly enjoying your work so far. I think you show more of how Zaina feels about her american name, becuase I'm having a bit of troulbe figuring out if it's apprehension or tolarance she's feelling, but that's just my opinion. Keep writing!
-Ruci

I think you have the begining of a great story. It is well written and has a nice suspense to it, but it seems to be going a bit too fast for my taste. Overall it's great though.

P.S. To space correctly I think you are supposed hold the Shift key and press Enter.