I thought it was really snappy, quirky and adorable. I loved it. My only critique, and this is just a personal opinion, is on your summary. I almost didn't read it because of the summary. I mean, yes you tell us exactly what it's about, which is what a summary is supposed to do, but it just doesn't draw you in. Maybe that's just me. Anyways, really good job, I plan to follow this closely.

Signed,
xL Rx

Yep, still not disappointed in the least. Oh, Mitch. Exactly in what sense of the word could possibly make us hate you in any way, shape, or form? I mean, come on. You gotta love his sense of humor and sarcasm. It's freaking ridiculous. I'm actually somewhat terrified to imagine just what type of human being would hate on our mouthwateringly handsome asshole. Keep 'em updates coming, Folly. I look forward to... well... just about everything about this story. Its got great potential and has a killer epic protagonist. I'll be rooting for you all the way!

Yay! Moar moar MOAR!

Jeez, what could Aiden have possibly said? I think I have a guess, but ahhh... update soon!
And this story is definitely not disappointing, so no worries. :D

MOAR. NOW. :D Please? I'm too hungry for more to even collect my thoughts into a decent review.

Great start for a story! Mitch seems like an interesting character... I enjoyed his "random" moments and can relate to his spacing out. :)