|Reviews for Only Human|
| Talysse 1/15/13 . chapter 3
I lmike it! It's a good story and I attend to read soon! :)
| Circuit Board 1/2/13 . chapter 3
Very American though.
| Serpent Tailed Angel 6/28/12 . chapter 1
This is an interesting premise. I love magic school stories and one with mythical creatures as the students just makes it even better. I don't know much about the characters yet, but Soren seems kind of timid.
One thing though, when you have multiple characters talking, you should start a new paragraph for each change in speaker. It just makes the conversation easier to follow.