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   JayLynn.Rummel 3/11/13 . chapter 25I FREAKING HATE TAYLIN! But Marilyn seems pretty awesome. Grr, stupid Rob! |
| JayLynn.Rummel 3/6/13 . chapter 24 I'M BAAACCCKK! My computer broke, well, now I'm all caught up and WOW, I did not see that one coming! |
| Snowy 1/2/13 . chapter 21 Sorry I haven't been reviewing but I started your story last night and have been reading all the chapters non stop. Your story is amazing because you put thought into the story and you have well developed characters. Ahhhh the cliffhanger is killing me! Keep writing, I am now a big fan! Happy new year! |
| JayLynn.Rummel 11/19/12 . chapter 18 Oh...My...Marshmallows... Jazzy! Don't go! You're, like, my favorite character! Come back! |
| Amber Dawn12 11/9/12 . chapter 17 ooo, good chapter, but i really really want to know about Rob's 'friend'. You should cut back a bit on the detail because it gets a little boring and you shouldn't repeat that muh either, then the story sort of starts to seem off. |
| JayLynn.Rummel 11/4/12 . chapter 17 GASP! Only 3/4 chapter until SHTF! (S*** hits the fan) well, I'm very interested to see what up with this mystery NYC chick |
| JayLynn.Rummel 11/3/12 . chapter 16 ...I'm scared. What did Rob do? |
| Jet556 11/3/12 . chapter 16 Heating up, huh? Glad I started reading this when I did. |
| JayLynn.Rummel 10/15/12 . chapter 15 AWW! Blood, oh my good, poor Kayle! And I'm so sorry about your Aunt, cousin, great unlce and your school being mean! I hope everythings okay! |
| JayLynn.Rummel 10/4/12 . chapter 14 Oh god. This is going to end...strangly...if that is a word... |
| Guest 10/3/12 . chapter 13 hi! Its me amberdawn12! FP wont let me sign in so i have to use this anonymous thing. Anyway this was a very very very awesome chapter! KEEP GOING! |
| JayLynn.Rummel 10/1/12 . chapter 13 awwwww! Poor Anna! 3 GAHH I HATE HATE HATE HATE ALEX! He should go lie in a whole and wait for aa nuke to drop on him :) |
| JayLynn.Rummel 9/24/12 . chapter 12 AWWWW! This chapter was so sweeeeeet! And Alex is really becoming a jerk, isn;t he! And I can't wait for Anna to come ashing don because she tries WAY to hard to be perfect! And Rob is SO AWESOMEEEE! Oh god, why aren't there any actual guys like that in Cali! Yeah, I'm a military brat... And a talkitive person...but i vow to follow your story until it is completed! Do mind cheaking out mine? I mean, ou don't have too...obviouy, but I would apiciate it loads |
| Amber Dawn12 9/20/12 . chapter 11 awwwww, im both sad and happy. Let Rob live PLEASE! |
| courtnestle 9/18/12 . chapter 9 the point of view is stil off here, which is frustrating to read. Sorry for being a little harsh. |
