nice poem, creative how the second verse was just the first one switched around

This hits awfully close to home. I'm not nearly as religious as I used to be when I was a kid, but I remember the days when I would praise God for everything - even when I felt abandoned by Him. Now, I question Him more than anything.

This is a nice little poem, although I'm not sure why you have it split into two halves. I would have liked it better without the dividing line, but that's just me. :)

His is written quite nicely. Good job. :-)

Very interesting technique! However, I think it's slightly short and could use some rhyming...Although, I think it is an amazing poem, how we try to please God if we need something and even if we don't recieve it, we still continue pleasing God...I think that's what its about...