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Hi! This is Ariana from .com. Your story has been added to the Slash category of our site :) Here's your review:

Ariana Thinks: Someone once told me that there are two types of stories: one in which ordinary people have extraordinary experiences, and another in which extraordinary people have ordinary experiences. "Art of Faith" fits into neither of those categories. Rather, NightWhisper25 portrays the beautiful simplicity of two very ordinary people going through very ordinary events. What makes "Art of Faith" so interesting is the extraordinary relationship between these two people. Meg and Naomi, the protagonists, meet by pure coincidence; yet their friendship grows until it transcends both religion and sexual preference. In many stories, the characters jump straight into relationships. This is definitely not the case with Naomi and Meg- NightWhisper25 takes time in fleshing out the emotions involved in building a friendship as well as the events that help lead to it. It is easy to understand why Naomi and Meg become friends. It is even easier to grow invested in Meg and Naomi's relationship.

On top of portraying a stunningly realistic friendship, "Art of Faith" also elaborates on the minor details of its character's lives: the relationship between Naomi and her mother, Meg's cultural identity, and Naomi's interest in art, all serve to add to the overall beauty of the story. NightWhisper25 strikes a perfect balance between her dialogue and narrative, as well. I never felt bored by her narrative- every piece was so wonderfully written that I found myself entranced with NightWhisper25's writing style. The dialogue was, as aforementioned, incredibly realistic, and never once did I find myself cringing at corny lines or overused cliches. Moreover, the POV switches in "Art of Faith" weren't confusing and repetitive like they often are in many other stories.

NightWhisper25 is definitely an author to look out for, and her story "Art of Faith" is one of the best I have read. Truly a masterpiece, "Art of Faith" will leave you both incredibly satisfied and desperate for another chapter. Give "Art of Faith" a chance- I promise, you will be just as blown away as I am.

I really like Naomi's character. She is well developed and I can see why Meg likes her. Her klutziness trait was great and now her reaction to Meg's confession spans her out from seeming a bit of a comedian (as well as kindhearted) to someone to be taken seriously, I love how those attributes came together.

Quick question about 'MegaDeath', did you misspell 'M-E-G-A-D-E-T-H' the thrash metal band...because as a fan I'm highly...okay slightly offended. If that is not the case and you are somehow referring to the concept of a million deaths at once then I'm sorry for the assumption.

Regardless wonderful story...

-May Dread watch over you-

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That was so naughty of you! Here we think she's going to admit to one thing and you give us something completely different. Love it! I like the way you're building this slowly. Keep up the good work.

i really thought meg was going to says she's gay wow what a twist. keep going though.

Gah, I love this so so much! Both Naomi and Meg are so sweet and I just love them as characters, and Meg's family is awesome, I love her sister. Can't wait for the next chapter!

To quote one of my favorite reviewers: "Woo! Keep going!"

A truly wonderful chapter. I loved the backstory on Meg and the angst she was feeling about keeping her secrets from Naomi. You handled it perfectly. Neela sounds great as well. I'm looking foward to the next chapter so please don't keep us waiting too long.

Woo! keep going.

really, REALLY loved this chapter. i like that they're taking it slow and becoming good friends. it feels real. update soon!

Woo! keep going.

Woo! keep going! :)

like it keep going.