Well...I am speechless. I think this is a great perspective on such a sad and touching subject; you portrayed it very well and I think that is what makes it more powerful because it's not to over the top. I like the last line, it brought a tear to my eye and I think if a piece can do that then it is is definitely worth a favourite.

Take Care,
Mylilblackpen :)

What is it? I'm lost.

Awesome! Short and Dramatic with a touch of suspense.