It's verry well written and dark as well. It defiantly has emotion I like that the reader can feel the rage. It's has a strong sense of revenge;I know it's about betrayal but revenge Fits into as well
Greet job ;)

Am I a sick person if I love this?

This made me sad, that's just how good it is. I love the way you portray things. Thank you for sharing this.

I haven't commented on here is so long that this is all new to me. What do I mean by this? The look underneath posting is different, yet interesting. What do I mean by this? Please excuse this I am impressed by the changes on this site. SERIOUSLY.

MY APOLOGIES as for your work here - this had really made me think. This is written well however it does make me sad reading this. It really does.