the supposed to be exciting partss are dull

Nice, I'm not that big of a fan of horror... But man, did you change my mind! Keep writing you're great at it!

What a sad ending! Awww! I thought there would be SOME hope! Oh well. This was well written, and deliciously scary :) Thanks for writing it.

It's me again :) AHHH I AM SOOO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT SCENE! I'm imagining so many scenarios in my head xD

At least we now know who Meredith is. Now we have to know WHAT she is. She's dead, but not a spirit. Continue please!

I guess my hunch about Sylvia was right... Then again it's also in your pen name. Good job with the chapter though! I'm excited to see how it ends.

/(*o*)\ I need to read more! Haha! Sorry, I didn't get to review the last chapter, busy with getting ready for school and crap. Anywho, good job!

Hey, it's me lol I just didn't log in xD I'm still freaked out...but I'm so intrigued! It sounds like the conclusion is coming up...

Ooh, I'm very scared to find out what happens next...Please update soon!

Wow, it's been a while since I've read this, but all I have to say is "wow". You've come a long way since the beginning, and it's nice. :)

"The play's the thing." Why won't I SHUT UP with Macbeth, and Shakespeare in general!

-Hermie

Great job! And I think I have a few ideas about what Sylvia is...
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I really like this play! I am soo interested in this. It's so good. I love the concept, and I'm so drawn to this story. The only thing that would make it the play of my lifetime is a mention of the Beatles and romance XD Just kidding, keep it beautiful, like it is now. :) Great job.

So far, this is epic! Can't wait for more! :)

D: Sylvia strikes again. Oh, and by the way, I think you typed the wrong name at beginning of the second part. Anyways good job!
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/('o')\ I need to read more! ;) This is really interesting. You're doing great! :D
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