|Reviews for Suffocating|
| PureHeartsWait 1/26/13 . chapter 1
This is straightforward and powerful, I like it. It's a simple three lines, yet it really makes you think. Why can't this person breathe? What's wrong with them? Stuff like that, so yeah, great job!
| Ygg 1/12/13 . chapter 1
Very straightforward, which enhances its powerful emotions. Well done!
| Ophelia Schmit 12/28/12 . chapter 1
Iambic meter is perfect in this poem! Great first haiku!
| Saki Kikkio Ohayashi 7/20/12 . chapter 1
| filledwithsilence 7/18/12 . chapter 1
| LeoValdezgirl77 7/16/12 . chapter 1
short sweet and to he point.
| Meadow Frost 7/10/12 . chapter 1
I like well written haiku's because they are so powerful in just a few lines.
| catching.my.breath 7/9/12 . chapter 1
| Aizawa Minami 7/8/12 . chapter 1
Very good haiku, not bad for a first Japanese poem, keep up the good work!
| Spring Storm 7/5/12 . chapter 1
Simple but powerful. Good job!
| Rusty136 7/2/12 . chapter 1
this is good keep going
| kloun mannequin 7/2/12 . chapter 1
wow, it's meaningful
| Escape16 7/2/12 . chapter 1
Wow. So simple and yet it still leaves such an impact... great job!:)
| DappledKarma 7/2/12 . chapter 1
Very simple and effective. It gets me thinking. :D
| Dreaming Red Rose Petals 7/2/12 . chapter 1
This is good. It manages to convey the meaning without going on and on. Good one!