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| Reviews for Suffocating |
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   PureHeartsWait 1/26/13 . chapter 1This is straightforward and powerful, I like it. It's a simple three lines, yet it really makes you think. Why can't this person breathe? What's wrong with them? Stuff like that, so yeah, great job! |
| Ygg 1/12/13 . chapter 1 Very straightforward, which enhances its powerful emotions. Well done! |
| Ophelia Schmit 12/28/12 . chapter 1 Iambic meter is perfect in this poem! Great first haiku! Hermie |
| Saki Kikkio Ohayashi 7/20/12 . chapter 1 Catchy |
| filledwithsilence 7/18/12 . chapter 1 lovely. :) |
| LeoValdezgirl77 7/16/12 . chapter 1 short sweet and to he point. |
| Meadow Frost 7/10/12 . chapter 1 I like well written haiku's because they are so powerful in just a few lines. Loved it. |
| catching.my.breath 7/9/12 . chapter 1 Pretty nice! |
| Aizawa Minami 7/8/12 . chapter 1 Very good haiku, not bad for a first Japanese poem, keep up the good work! |
| Spring Storm 7/5/12 . chapter 1 Simple but powerful. Good job! |
| Rusty136 7/2/12 . chapter 1 this is good keep going |
| kloun mannequin 7/2/12 . chapter 1 wow, it's meaningful |
| Escape16 7/2/12 . chapter 1 Wow. So simple and yet it still leaves such an impact... great job!:) |
| DappledKarma 7/2/12 . chapter 1 Very simple and effective. It gets me thinking. :D |
| Dreaming Red Rose Petals 7/2/12 . chapter 1 This is good. It manages to convey the meaning without going on and on. Good one! |
