When I read the part with Riddick eating her Hersheys bar, I lol'ed when I read the line "One does not simply eat my candy bar." I immediately thought of this (take out multiple spaces, about every 5 letters): ol/fz /sw/i 57/5/ 8/11/ frabz -One- Does- not-s imply -Walk -into -mord or-12 c52c. jpg

I'm liking this Jared guy, I have a feeling he is one sexy man of mystery ;)
Great chapter, the only thing is I don't know how to see the bigger story cover picture and if it's important I want to know!
Keep up the good work :)

I do realize the link is not showing, please click here for the link. I apologize for the difficulty.

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Great start! I love apocalyptic stories but they all seem to start the same...
You know, with nuclear disasters and whatnot. So it's great that you have
an original idea and added a bit of science to back it up!

Also, Striker is a fantastic name! You just know she is going to be kickass!