|Reviews for Project HALO|
| TooLazyToLogin 11/16/12 . chapter 1
When I read the part with Riddick eating her Hersheys bar, I lol'ed when I read the line "One does not simply eat my candy bar." I immediately thought of this (take out multiple spaces, about every 5 letters): ol/fz /sw/i 57/5/ 8/11/ frabz -One- Does- not-s imply -Walk -into -mord or-12 c52c. jpg
| Counting Waves 7/14/12 . chapter 2
I'm liking this Jared guy, I have a feeling he is one sexy man of mystery ;)
Great chapter, the only thing is I don't know how to see the bigger story cover picture and if it's important I want to know!
Keep up the good work :)
| Heather Chance 7/11/12 . chapter 2
I do realize the link is not showing, please click here for the link. I apologize for the difficulty.
| Counting Waves 7/2/12 . chapter 1
Great start! I love apocalyptic stories but they all seem to start the same...
You know, with nuclear disasters and whatnot. So it's great that you have
an original idea and added a bit of science to back it up!
Also, Striker is a fantastic name! You just know she is going to be kickass!